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Wednesday, October 19, 2011

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                                            The Danger of the Reality  


            In the article "The Danger of The Reality" Timothy Sexton argues that some messages from TV may be manipulating on purpose, they are molding our minds to do something with our lives. Although they want us to believe these massages might be a wonderful keys to achieve successes,.He also said that competition could be a wonderful path to get the successes in this society. Furthermore, we are capable to believe or not if we realize that somebody could be famous only having a great image. Also we may probe it with any evidences from the society or our own experiences. Moreover, Sexton mentioned the television may give us wrong advices sometimes. The ability is the most powerful skill to make us work in wherever we want to do for our success, and the image is a superficial part of life could help a lot to achieve opportunities, but not all the time. The education is the most important key to fulfill the American dream.If we realize the image over ability and the obsolescence of education might not be the highest choice to allow
           
             I agree with the author because he emphasized that education is the best way to allow for a great future. Even though television  shows us that image is wonderful answer to lead us to get the success, but that’s not really truth, because at this time we have probed that many people who has higher education will get more advantages to find a comfortable job. For instance, many people are trying to find a better job every day in many establishment don’t let them work. As a result, it is necessary to be educated to have welfare and more opportunities will appear right away without any inconveniences. 
          
                 Nevertheless, some TV shows rarely give us wrong advices telling us that we'll be famous if we participate in any kind of program. Obviously, nobody knows for have long it might be. On the other hand, they want us to believe that it isn't necessary  have any grade of education to make easy money than having a career. I think theses massages will be wrong for education, because nobody at this time could survive with a well-being if we don't work on having more knowledge. Furthermore, if we don’t have a higher education we are avoiding our opportunities to have a great future, so we should confront our difficulties to learn something and we realize our lives as Professionals.                  
          
                  At this period of time, many immigrants arrive to the United States to achieve the American Dream, but they know which is the dream, if we realize they are trying to considering as part of this society having the same customs, but it really require to be professionals otherwise no one feel comfortable if they don't get a career. As a illustration, a indescribable percentage of young people refuse to get in at the College, because they don't clarify their ambitions and dreams. As result, they prefer have simple kinds of lives without a purpose.
             
                    Therefore, some of these TV shows are being criticized because they are replicating at the society to do something, even they want us to believe on it, At this time, these TV shows want us not to become educated to keep us avoiding our dreams and ambitions. Meanwhile, most of the audiences are children that can be affected for it, and they probably think is easier to make money in this life without education. Furthermore, most of us know the reality, but we are the only one who can decide what we want to do, so we’ll never forget our abilities that helps a lot to confront this world, and at the same time we’ll be professionals with our completed dreams.

4 comments:

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  2. I like your essay because your claim is clear, and you always refer to the text, but I think that the resons you wrote should be with your claim, so that your thesis would be much clear.

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  3. Hello, I was asked to give you feedback on your revision of Cat 1
    First of all, I think in the summary you included some of your opinion y, you supposed to put your reason .
    Secondly your reasons connected to the topic. But you have to organize a little better and each reason separate in different paragraph; also you have to concrete and give more examples and support with more evidence.And in one reason you agree and in other said different

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  4. Not bad.

    A few issues: 1. The statement "[Sexton] also said that competition could be a wonderful path to get the successes in this society" is incorrect--Sexton believes reality TV's emphasis on competition is dangerous.
    2. Floweross is right: you could use some more concrete examples.

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